So, the environmental problems can be solved by the rise in price of fuel partially, but not radically. And then, better to take advantage to all the price mechanism, administration and the publics knowledge, than to make use of only one of them.
点评:最后一段是败笔,或者说明显写的没前面几段好!
试改为: Therefore, raising fuel price can, to some extent, tackle the environmental problems but is far from thoroughly and the combination of price mechanism, administration and public knowledge is much better than make use of merely one of them.
总评:我想也不用多说了,8分。
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