In addition, some special languages in Canada and Austrilia have words that reflect a way of life that is connected close to the Earth. There are fifty different words that mean `snow` in one Canadian native language. Various local languages have been evolved through human`s lifes and have been continuing to change step by step. If we expect to learn the most aboriginal languages, lifestyles count for learning.

　　结构分析：此段似乎没有太明显的句型错误，但是词汇错误却多了（如红色部分）。内容还是一贯地很容易把握。

　　When you make a decision to learn languages, a good advice recommended to you is that living with the local people whose mother language is what you will learn, can communicate with you frequently. In this way can you learn languages quickly ,efficiently and authoritatively.

　　结构分析：值得表扬的是此段最后一句倒装句终于用对了。但是，红色部分，即第一句由于企图使用复杂句，导致出现了很严重的理解问题，这是一大败笔！

　　To sum up, learning languages is not a simple task but a process of knowing different cultures and customs. So, to get involved in the cultures and lifestyles can make your learning happily .I am sure that you will enjoy every minute of learning languages. （ 251words ）

　　结构分析：最后一段有一个小错误，其他都还好，属于中规中矩的写法。

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