名师谈雅思写作评分标准中的连贯与衔接
我们再来看学生习作的例子。话题是面向孩子的广告是否应该被允许。所选段落修改自学生作文,主要增加了若干逻辑连接词(以黄色标记出来),使得整个段落的行文变得流畅了许多。考试大
The first danger would be that it will pose a heavy financial burden on families with kids. This is because, young children can be easily attracted by advertisements, and then they would request or even force their parents to buy them what they see on advertising. Unfortunately, most families have only one child and parents always spoil their kids; for this reason, childrens demands are normally fulfilled. In addition, prices of products advertised on TV commercials are frequently higher than those of other normal commodities, so that the financial burden will be much heavier.
代词的正确使用
在连贯与衔接的第二种实现方式概念重复及指代中,最需要予以关注的是代词的正确使用。因为,由于受到母语负迁移的影响,中文代词使用的不严格会诱使学生频频出错。集中学习并立即改正这些错误对于很多考生而言迫在眉睫。
第一个最常见的错误是一个句子中代词的频繁转换,即所谓pronoun shift。典型的例子是When one searches on the Internet, you will potentially get onto illegal websites, which will cause negative consequences to us.在这句话中one,you和us未能保持一致,让考官不知所云。应该修改为When searching on the Internet, we may potentially get onto illegal websites, which will cause negative consequences to us.
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