第五段 总结:综上所述花钱维护公共图书馆不是一种浪费钱的行为。
例文outline:
Maintaining public libraries is not a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries function.
Firstly, as a necessary part of our social life, public library can not replace by computer technology, since
Secondly, as a necessary part of our social life, public library can not replace by computer technology, because
At last but not least, we can not deny computer technology can replace certain aspects of public library, but there is still a long way to go for it to replace public library completely.
In a word, maintaining public libraries is not a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries function.
从上面的结构中我们可以看到,题目中的两条主线都有详细的文字进行论述,这样一来考生的文章析题程度(Task Response)的分数就会相对较高。而如果文章一直在论证电脑科技能否取代图书馆的话就会有些偏题,分数相对也会受到一定的影响。
附:IELTS写作评分标准
1.语法词汇代表着学生的英语语言能力(Lexical Resources and Grammatical Accuracy)
2.文章的文章及行文衔接(Coherence and Cohesion)
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