However, advertising involves some defects and I would like to list two of them herein. Initially, the popularity of advertisements has been growing along with the increased layout of design as well as showing up in the marketplace more frequently. The cost will definitely be passed on to the customers. Furthermore, the generation Y would probably lose their individuality because many of them buy the same goods advertised constantly in media during a certain period of time, which makes them appear alike.
After the above analysis of the pros and cons, I tend to be in favor of the positive effects. Undoubtedly, nothing is more important than living in a society where ordinary people can enjoy the conveniences and competitive prices brought by commercials. I believe that the negative effects can be minimized through sustainable economic growth and education.
在整个写作过程,我有意识地应用了下列技巧:
1. 多变表达。如除positive and negative我用了merits and defects, good and bad ,pros and cons。 而advantages and disadvantages来不及用上;还有,advertising=ads=advertisements=commercials, commodity=goods=product=item 等等。
2. 尽量使用长句,由大量采用过去分词短语及现在分词短语修饰名词来实现,从句也不少;
3. 举出最少一个实例,不讲任何空话,不含任何与考题无关的内容;
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