九. 累赘
言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如:in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.本句的the fact that he is lazy系同谓语从句,我们按照上述能用词组的不用从句可以改为:in spite of his laziness, i like him.
例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析:整个句子可以大大简化。
改为:diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十. 不连贯
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例1. the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析:the fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。it 与things 在数方面不一致。
改为:fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十一. 综合性语言错误
所谓综合性语言错误,是指除了上述十种错误以外,还有诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等方面的错误。
例1.today, money to everybody is very importance, ours eat, cloth, live, go etc.
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