旧题Some people think that sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them. Others think that education and training are better solutions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
新题Prisons are useless for crime problems and education is a better solution. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
谢振礼老师雅思范文:监狱教育
IELTS Writing Task 2
Essay Topic: Criminals and Prisons
As seen in China, 2012-5-12
谢振礼老师点评》
此试题把作者搞糊涂了,顿时无从下手作答。按个人的知识或经验,重犯理当坐大牢,藉以隔离社会而不至于再伤害无辜。监狱里都有职业训练--木工,水泥工,机器工,烹饪,修车,也有成人教育课程。总希望犯人出狱后改邪归正,从此变成良民。搞不懂的是为什么真题问: 施于罪犯教育训练胜过送这些坏蛋去坐牢更是良策。你同意还是不同意。疑点是:难道教育的场所是和监狱分开?搞不懂!
英文写作高手答题的立场清清楚楚,论证头头是道,很值得烤鸭参考。大意是说教育囚犯比起监禁囚犯更为划算,而却又能让坏人有改过自新的机会。就这样写,只要英文有慎老师一半的水平,保证写作高分。
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