例如,在学术写作TASK1中, 对事物在一个区间段内变化趋势的描写,可以采用单个主语的动词连动句式,又可以采用动名词作状语的句式。
例如:After it declined slightly, it soared and reached a peak of 100 but reduced to 80.
改为: After a slight decline, it soared, reaching a peak of 100 but reducing to 80. 或It rose steadily and reached a high of 100, but declined to 80.
例如: For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
整个句子可以大大简化, 改为:Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
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