G.; A; more; dramatic; rise; is; predicted; between; 2030; and; 2040; in; Japan,; by; which; time; it; is; thought; that; the; proportion; of; elderly; people; will; be; similar; in; the; three; countries.;
H.; It; seems; that; the; experiences; we; have; in; life; are; so; unpredictable; and; so; powerful,; that; they; can; boost; or; overide; other; influences,;
学生写作实例
实例1:It; is; quite; obvious/evident /apparent; that; the; quantity; of; families; who; tends; to; go; outside; and; infuse; fresh; oxygen; into; their; lungs; is; growing; steadily.
实例 2:It; is; universally; acknowledged; that; the; best; way; to; arouse; people love; to; our; nature,; who; has; devoted; herself; too; much; to; human; being development; while; has; received; barely; anything; till; now,; is; to; let; them; see; the; beauty; of; hers; by; themselves.
这是XVCC23强化班里一位基础较好的学生的写作实例,其中的语法、措辞方面的错误已经进行了修改。
实例3:Clearly,; rush; hours; emerges; in; the; early; morning; as; well; as; ; early; evening; which; is; most; busy/the; busiest; in; a; day; as; a; whole; in; London.
修改建议:这个句子的结构应该是无可厚非的,但是,按照雅思评分的标准,句式稍微做一下调整,会更漂亮: 如:It; is; clear; that; rush; hours; emerge; in; the; early; morning; as; well; as; in; the; early; evening; which; is; most; busy/the; busiest; in; a; day; as; a; whole; in; London. 或者改成 It; is; demonstrated; that; rush; hours; emerge; in; the; early; morning; as; well; as; in; the; early; evening; which; is; most; busy/the; busiest; in; a; day; as; a; whole; in; London. 这样一个小小的调整,其句子修改前后的效果是显而易见的。
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