Cambridge IELTS5 Test3有关竞争与合作的题目中,考官最后给出的参考范文是得分为6分的学生作文,文章共分成4段,结尾段是阐述自己观点和理由的段落,而中间两段分别介绍双方的看法,但是两个段落明显存在长短详略,所以考官给出的评语中有这么一句话:Although the answer considers the main issues in the question, it deals much more with the aspect of competition than it does with cooperation However, the main points are relevant and the writers point of view is generally clear.
这篇文章也正好提醒我们的考生在完成此类文章时一定要注意在分析双方看法时不要有明显的字数差距。
我们再看一例Cambridge IELTS6 Test2有关体育明星高收入是否公平的题目回答,考官给出了一篇Model Answer,我们可以清楚的看到全文的4个段落的框架分法,开头和结尾段字数略少,并未在开头段直接亮明自己的观点和看法,相反的是留到结尾段才首次提出Personally, I think the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.
主体两段字数比较接近,分别论证双方不同的看法,但是这篇考官范文也明确解答了不少考生的疑惑,就是在讨论双方的时候该以何种姿态来写,赞同还是批判?在此文中考官更推荐的是尽管未在开头段给出自己的观点,但是在论证双方看法时却有明显表露出自己的看法,因为在证明有人认为不公平时,考官除了提出他们的看法外,更是直接用However提出这些看法的错误性Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds So the notion of fairness is not the issue. 而在下一段证明另一方,也是考官赞同的一方时,却并未出现如此的辩驳。
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