改为:The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九、累赘
写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。
比如:In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句的the fact that he is lazy系同谓语从句,我们按照上述能用词组的不用从句可以改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him.
比如:For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
整个句子可以大大简化为:
Diligent people use money only to buy what they need.
十、不连贯
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通,这也是考生常犯的毛病。
比如:The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
分析:the fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯,it与things在数方面不一致。
细节决定成败这句话用来描述雅思写作再合适不过,这些细节是的失分点在很大程度上决定了雅思写作能够获得多高的分数,上面提到的错误犯的越少雅思写作就能获得更高的分数。最后,雅思预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!
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