本句的the fact that he is lazy系同谓语从句,我们按照上述能用词组的不用从句可以改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him.
比如:For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
整个句子可以大大简化为:Diligent people use money only to buy what they need.
十、不连贯
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通,这也是考生常犯的毛病。比如:The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
分析:the fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯,it与things在数方面不一致。
以上总结的这些雅思写作十大扣分点多数都是细节上的问题,当然细节上的问题更能体现考生雅思写作的真实水平,细节处理好了,高分的雅思写作也就没问题了,否则,整个雅思写作看起来就是中式英语作文。
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