雅思写作范文：先工作再上大学的利弊_雅思英语写作

雅思写作范文：先工作再上大学的利弊

　　greater, turning into powerful force to drive them on cherishing their further

　　education. Next, travel can enlarge ones vision, and students can apply what they

　　have seen or heard into their college curriculums/subjects, helping them better

　　understand theoretical knowledge.

　　BODY2

　　On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to working or traveling before going

　　to university

　　Supporting sentences

　　First, high-school graduates are too young to distinguish the good from the bad. It

　　is common that Generation Y likes hanging out with friends; they move from one

　　group to another and their friendships change over a period of a few weeks or months.

　　Therefore, in society the probability of getting involved with evildoers is pretty

　　high. It is said that the young are easy to become illegal drugs takers if misleading

　　guidance is conducted. Second, to travel for one year is too expensive for people

　　from all walks of life, not to mention that students financial sources are chiefly

　　from their parents.

　　Conclusion 2

　　In conclusion, advantages of working or traveling for a long time before further education are obvious but not doable. In my opinion, to work at a very young age might result a hazardous social life and to travel for one year will increase financial burden to the family, hence to educate children in a row can mould them into sensible human resources.