另一篇文章,主要展示最值的表达
In the term of the length of the Underground Railway System , that in London ranks first among the six in that it reaches 394km, almost 36 times longer than that in Kyoto, the shortest. The second longest is in Paris .
Focusing on the open date, we see that once again London URS was strikingly earlier than all other counterparts. Put it accurately , London opened the URS as early as in1863, 37 years earlier than that in Paris. By contrast, the youngest is LA who did not start to run URS until 2001.
说明文注重语言的流畅,简洁。在图表作文中,不追求词藻的华丽,只追求表达的清楚。
注意点:1.没有必要写出每条信息,要辨别关键特征
2.段落划分要合理
3.衔接和过渡词很重要
一整篇文章的例子:剑五P75
To be located in the town centre,S2 is in the town centre, a non-traffic zone. As result, it is only accessible by the railway whereas the main roads are unavailable. Moreover, it is hemmed out the houses, meaning its convenient for the dweller s to do some shopping. In addition, it is closer to the south industry but far away from the north.
Unlike S2, S1 will be set in the countryside, where both the railway and main roads are ready. But the 44000 people from Bransdon and Crandson find it not easy to reach S1, although it is connected by the railway with Crandson. Furthermore, this site is far away from the two industry areas. However, it is convenient for those who live in Hindo.
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