剖析:本句后半部分for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句.
改为:there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.
四. 悬垂修饰语
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中at the age of ten只点出十岁时,但没有说明 谁十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了.
改为:
when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析:句中不定式短语 to do well in college 的逻辑主语不清楚.
改为:
to do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五. 词性误用
词性误用常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等.
例1. none can negative the importance of money.
剖析:negative 系形容词,误作动词。
改为:
none can deny the importance of money.
六. 指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句:
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