例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
剖析:显然,考生把obstacles障碍,障碍物误作substance物质了。另外the increasing use 应改为abusive use 。
改为:
the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九. 累赘
言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如:
in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.
本句的the fact that he is lazy系同谓语从句,我们按照上述能用词组的不用从句可以改为:in spite of his laziness, i like him.
例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析:整个句子可以大大简化。
改为:
diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十. 不连贯
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例1. the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析:the fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。it 与things 在数方面不一致。
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