淡化雅思文章模板痕迹之双边结构写作_雅思英语写作

淡化雅思文章模板痕迹之双边结构写作

　　b. 转折过渡+提出观点

　　However， everything is mixed blessing. Employing children to work should be viewed as a harsh treatment and abuse to them. Kids， after all， unlike adults， are immature both physically and psychologically. They are extremely vulnerable to both occupational hazards and social evils. More importantly， children are at the golden age for learning not only due to their brain structure but also their curiosity and desire for knowledge. It goes without saying that the silly action permitting children to work for financial reasons is ridiculous.

　　双边结构的第二段要论述对立面的观点，但是不同于上一段的是，此段不仅要充分的客观陈述一种观点同时还要带有观点倾向，因为要完成文章的第二个任务---提出自己的观点。笔者认为这样的观点提法比较自然，不需要另起一段提出而显得比较呆板。

　　3. 结尾段

　　模板语言：

　　In the final analysis， I concede that to some extent whether the ultimate effect of phenomena is good or not， one thing is certain that phenomenon in itself is neither good nor bad. And it is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to society. I am convinced that___________.

　　做一个简单的对比：

　　非模板语言：

　　In conclusion， although there lies various excuses for letting the young children work for salary， it is pointless that this way could benefit them in terms of accumulating work experience and learning the meaning of responsibility. （自然流露观点倾向）