大开眼界：一个雅思作文题，七个开头段写法_雅思英语写作

大开眼界：一个雅思作文题，七个开头段写法

　　下面雅思为大家整理了雅思作文：一个题目，7个开头段写法，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。

　　Throughout the history， male leaders often made the society more violent and conflicting. If women governed the world， it would be a more peaceful world. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ Give an example to support your idea.

　　讲解不同的开篇方式，从简单到复杂，从低分到高分

　　模式一： 3句式 rephrase the title + quote others opinions + make ones own point clear

　　用一个好的句式 Recently there has been a hot debate in the public over the issue whether the world would be more peace if women governed the world.

　　用动词变化和连词连接观点 Some people believe that women would be better governors while other people couldnt agree.

　　提出自己的观点，如果现在还没有明确的观点，可以虚晃一枪 I will analyze the two opinions and then give my own point of view.

　　模式二：由于上面一篇文章并没有显示出创造性，所以容易被考官识破，只能得到5到5.5 分，实在是模板痕迹太过明显，所以可以考虑升级。

　　可以从world governor 或者man/ woman作为切入点，避免直接谈到话题，而是后退一步从话题的部分内容中切入

　　Its generally agreed that women are more considerate and patient than men. However， would the world be more peaceful if women were the governor of the world？ Personally， I believe that women are better governors than men.