雅思写作考试过程中的连贯性_雅思英语写作

雅思写作考试过程中的连贯性

　　这一段谈的是表达能力，它的重要性与职业，身份有关，从not need much skill或of little importance到more important，最后是most important。

　　b. 由一般到特殊排列

　　If areader is lost， it is generally because the writer has not been careful enoughto keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms.Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader， hacking his waythrough the verbiage， simply doesnt know what it means. Perhaps a sentence hasbeen so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of severalways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses， or has switched pronouns inmid-sentence， so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who istalking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A ---- thewriter， in whose head the connection is clear， has not bothered to provide themissing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by nottaking the trouble to look it up. He may think that sanguine andsanguinary mean the same thing， but the difference is a bloody bigone. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.

　　这一段谈的是a writers carelessness，先给出一个general statement作为主题句，然后通过5个perhaps加以例证。

　　c. 由特殊到一般排列

　　I donot understand why people confuse my Siamese cat， Prissy， with the one I hadseveral years ago， Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy， aquiet， feminine feline， loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keepher distance from people， exert her independence and is never so rude as tobeg， lick， or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright， eyesclosed， perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry， on the other hand，loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. Heexpected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him doanything， whether it was decorous or not， and he usually offended my friends insome way. The cat made himself quite comfortable， on the top of the television，across strangers feet or laps， in beds， drawers， sacks， closets， or nooks. Thedifference between them is imperceptible to strangers.