如何走出雅思写作TASK2三步走中的常见误区_雅思英语写作

如何走出雅思写作TASK2三步走中的常见误区

　　误区二：举例过于具体，代表性不强

　　如2008年12月13号曾经考过这样一道雅思题：

　　Some people believe that a country can benefit a lot from the fact that many students graduate from universities. Others believe that sending a large percentage of young students to university is the way which leads to future highly rate of unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion？

　　某考生在文章的最后写道：So in my opinion， its necessary for a county to send more students to the university and meet the requirement of the market for more talents .But in general I think its better for a country to improve the standard of entering the university. Its also good for China to select the students in the new ways but Gaokao. This will be more essential than built several new universities.

　　这里姑且不讨论最后提出来的improve the standard of entering the university有跑题的嫌疑，光是Its also good for China to select the students in the new ways but Gaokao.这一句中China和Gaokao两个名词的出现就会让考官丈二和尚摸不着头脑，因为考官压根就不知道中国的高考是怎么一回事。而且就算知道，他也会认为你的文章因为采取了这样个体化的例子而削弱了整体的说服力，因为在学术化的写作里个别的事例并不具广泛推广意义。