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People have, in recent years, shown concern on the dire consequences of global warming and air pollution. Some people suggest that we should limit are travel instead of car use. It seems to me that the objection against air travel is based on incorrect facts and stereotypes. Vehicle is an integral segment of urban industrial civilization, mirroring contemporary life, in its best and unrest aspects.
Just as machinery is integral to industrialization, air is central to world economy. Air travels make it possible for people to move around the world freely and quickly. Today, the tips can be completed in a matter of hours. One can attend a meeting in Pairs and dinner in New York the same day. There is a growing recognition that air travels have several advantages, while(连接词使用有误,改成meanwhile)it can ensures(删掉s)the growth of modern business such as international tourism, transportation and express delivery ,etc. Therefore, limiting air travel itself is a grave mistake ,that(非限定从句引导词改成which)would be a severe blow to these industries and may even damage world economy.
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