Once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.
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Band 9
This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. All key features of each stage of the process are appropriatelyand accurately presented. An excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporatespart of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. The message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. Paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed. The language used is very fluent and sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor slips can be found and these do not detract from the high rating.
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