盘点雅思写作十大“见官死”开头_雅思英语写作

盘点雅思写作十大“见官死”开头

　　典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parents responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

　　见官死开头之六：过分简单没有重点

　　典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important, lets talk about it!

　　见官死开头之七：用词不当表达不准

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we cant take the responsibility to form a family.

　　见官死开头之八：意思重复原地踏步

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

　　见官死开头之九：观点武断态度强硬

　　典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

　　In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who dont have confidence, they all have failed.