错误: While talking to you在这里没错。当主句的主语和状语从句的指代的是同一个人或物时,状语从句的主语可以省略,这就是状语从句省略结构。your could-be employers is应该是your could-be employers are.否则主谓不一致。pay him应该是pay him or her.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japans 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
错误: 119 million citizens lives应该是119 million citizens live. 否则主谓不一致。which应该是where或in which. which引导的定语从句应该是一个不完整的句子,where或in which的后面才能加上一个完整句
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australias Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
错误: whom wish to die应该是who wish to die. whom引导的定语从句应该是一个不完整的句子,whom在定语从句中只能做宾语。而在who引导的定语从句,who既可以做主语,也可以做宾语。
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
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