分析:sat与said之间没有标记逻辑关系,错误!可以添加and,形成并列关系,即:
I sat down beside her and said nothing.
示例2:I entered the room saw mother sit there wait for me come back.
分析:这里有5个动词,都没有标记逻辑关系,错误!通过分析,我们看到:entered和saw可以并列,因为它们拥有共同的1;sit和wait可以并列,因为它们拥有共同的
1,但这两组动词之间就不能再并列了,因为无法这么做。这就意味着:这句话里的动词有的可以并列,而有的不可以。
示例3:I opened the bag took out some paper and a pen, sat down started take notes.
分析:opened,took out,sat down,started这四个动词拥有共同的1,而且都是1直接行使或发出的动作,所以,可以采取并列关系;但take因为有个过渡层,因此并列处理不合适。
2.从属关系示例
示例1:I sat down beside her said nothing.
分析:动词关系混乱,假如想确保said,则需要牺牲后面,如:
I sat down beside her, saying nothing.
假如确保后面,则牺牲前面:
Sitting down beside her, I said nothing.
示例2:To quit smoking, I eat candies.
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