最近雅思作文维持这一个显著的特点,意思难懂,争论的焦点难以把握。很多考生在考场上看了几个认识的单词,然后翻译成中文,加上自己的想象,就开始下笔。无论语言多好,也很难拿到及格的分数。把握一个题目争论之处,有的放矢,才能够保证文章切题,获得高分。笔者将分析最近的一些作文题目,然后用一些学生的观点做例子,以帮助广大考生以后更好更快地切题。
Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?
观点一: it might cost a lot when moving large companies and factories, since it will prove difficult to operate business in remote areas.
错误:是否容易做生意,带来经济效益并不能够解释是否应该将公司或者工厂移到市郊去。因为文章只在乎是否能够解决住房和交通问题,至于其中的经济得失不在文章讨论之列。
观点二:it is nearly impossible to move large companies and factories at once, for most of companies are large in size.
错误:能不能够将工厂和公司移到市郊也不在文章讨论范围。题目很明显已经作出一个假设,就是把公司和工厂搬到市郊是完全有可能的,目前所关注的是这个做法是否可以解决住房和交通问题。
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