需规避雅思写作开头五:语法错误 惨不忍睹
典型失败案例:Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parents responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
需规避雅思写作开头六:过分简单 没有重点
典型失败案例:Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, lets talk about it!
需规避雅思写作开头七:用词不当 表达不准
典型失败案例:Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we cant take the responsibility to form a family.
需规避雅思写作开头八:意思重复 原地踏步
典型失败案例:Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
需规避雅思写作开头九: 观点武断 态度强硬
典型失败案例:Topic1-The importance of confidence
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