Relating back to the question asked
Its not enough that the points you make are relevant to the topic that the question is about, you need to show how they are relevant by relating those points back to the question asked.
If you dont relate the points you are making back to the question its very possible that one of the following might happen,
A.The examiner might not get your point. Without you there to explain it, its possible they might not see why you included that point no matter how obvious it seems to you.
B.The examiner might not believe that you understand the relevance of your point. It is possible that you are just including lots of points at random hoping that at least some are relevant . This is not the sort of impression you want to make, so make it clear you know what you are doing.
As well as these two major issues, there are some minor stylistic habits you should try to avoid is possible.
using clichs
using rhetorical questions
run on sentences
using the same word repeatedly
using more than two commas in one sentence
your entire answer being one long paragraph
The Conclusion
The conclusion of an essay is where you sum up and offer some kind of overall evaluation. Here, you show your ability not only to repeat the facts, but to use them. Like the introduction the conclusion should be short, preferably one paragraph.
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