in the following paragraphs I will present my opinion on this question
The same can be said of a conclusion which does the following:
In conclusion it is obvious that both arguments contain their own positive and negative features and each method could be used in different situations Where is the writers clear position?
Consider the following question :
Nowadays many people enjoy dangerous sports such as mountain climbing or parachuting. Governments should ban these sports to protect the safety of the public. Do you agree or disagree.
An introduction with a clear position might look like this:
In recent years we have seen a considerable rise in dangerous or extreme sports, although I do not support an outright ban on such activities, I do feel that governments should restrict or regulate these pursuits.
The introduction outlines the topic and directly expresses a clear position.
The body paragraphs should also follow the line of the stated opinion. The following paragraph does the following NOT support a clear position.
In modern society many people feel stress from their work so they look for new and exciting ways to relieve their work pressure. One effective way to do this is to partake in extreme sports such as surfing, skiing or parachute jumping. However these sports often result in injury or death to the individual and this is not good for society.
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