中间段2:bridge段间过渡1+分论点argument2+evidence论证+ bridge段间过渡2
中间段1:分论点argument1+evidence论证
结论:conclusion= a restatement of thesis重申总论点
CONCLUSION: 学会写TRADITIONAL ESSAY就不怕IELTS
2 逻辑
作文所有的评分标准都是逻辑
TR-task response
是总论点+分论点+论证=思维逻辑
CC=coherence and cohesion
是段落过度+句子逻辑关系(递进、转折、因果)+从句=思维逻辑+语言逻辑
Grammar + Lexical Resource=Academic
学术性=语言逻辑严谨性
所以:有好的逻辑永远比长句更能的高分
3 How to write like a native speaker?
1. 不是句子越长越好
The point that the greatest significance should be attached to is not which word looks most spectacular at a specific place, but in what way you can express yourself accurately in a rather short period of time, as most students are not aware of, and as is what most writing teachers are having headache about, especially in countries of test-oriented education system, namely, China.
这句话不太好懂呢,老外看也不见得,搞不好还以为是错句。其实语法角度来说,是不错的。
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