我们之所以会产出如此多的包装垃圾是因为我们每天对商品的消耗量比过去的家庭的消耗量要多得多。
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学生常犯错误之六宗罪
第一宗罪:省略引导词
Married males and none married females account for the same percentage can be seen from the chart.(W)
That married males and none married females account for the same percentage can be seen from the chart.(R)
前一个句子省略掉了引导词,结果导致了句子重谓语的情况出现。
第二宗罪:滥用引导词(画蛇添足)
That teenager committed crime has become one of the most serious problems in todays society.(W)
Teenager committed crime has become one of the most serious problems in todays society.(R)
句子的主语仅仅是一个短语而非句子,不能误认为是从句。
第三宗罪:从句单独出现
Whether new technology is a blessing or a curse.
第一、第二和第三宗罪的错误都在于对从句性质认识不足,具体含义参见从和句两重意义的讲解。
第四宗罪:错用引导词
We have to decide that we can do for the next generation. (R)
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