修改后:Many sociologists point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on population control and also threatening to take already scarce city jobs。
3、 错误的平行结构
所谓平行结构,就是指两个意思并列的成份在写作时要用同等的语法形式表达,并保证逻辑上的一致,否则就破坏了其平行结构。
①错误的并列
In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built and which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment。
点评:and who/and which 结构是考生所犯的错误中最常见但最严重的一种,因为它导致从句与主句间一种不合逻辑的关系。
修改后:In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment。
②一系列平行结构上的不正确使用
Many people choose air transportation because it is fast, offers convenience and it is not very expensive。
点评:当词或词组被放在一个系列时,它们在意义上和结构上必须都是平行的。
修改后:Many people choose air transportation because it is fast, convenient and inexpensive。
③错误的省略
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