I think the main point is to make sure the young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world。
研习过程:范文原句启示对写作的影响
1. 观点不绝对
a。范文原句:
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day。
b。启示:这句话中用到了tend to agree 这个短语,表示倾向于同意,表现出不绝对的语气。
c。对写作的影响:
I am inclined to think that I tend to believe that
2。措辞严谨
a范文原句: This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for。
b。启示:副词partly,貌似简单,但是实际上大多数考生没有用过。这个副词虽小,但是表达的意思是:这里列举的原因只是一部分,体现出了写作的严谨。
c。对写作的影响:
中文例句:因为道路体系不好,所以大城市堵车。
未模仿前:The traffic congestion is because of the poor road system。
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