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名师指导3月7日雅思考试大作文解析

　　论证：Longer life span gives rise to a growing number of aging population, who can actually attend to their own offspring who are either too busy to take care of themselves or too young to look after themselves. Offered the proper guidance and attendance from the older generation, the youth are more likely to focus on their own business。

　　内部可以配搭举例子使用。

　　Take China for example. Due to fierce competition in society, a majority of parents have to spend most of their time on their work, rendering their own children lonely and abandoned. In that case, grandparents of those children could at least mitigate this situation by giving priority to the younger generation。

　　2 对于社会的影响

　　本质法：这是个信息化社会，更多需要的是经验和信息，而年纪较大的人无疑可以提供更多的资源和经验，有助于社会的成长和进步。

　　观点：Longer life span offers the working population more opportunities to contribute themselves to the accumulation of social wealth。

　　论证： In this information age characterized by experience, the old who enjoy more social and job experience could lend their hand to a great many junior workers by sharing their experience and resources。

　　内部可以配搭例子法或实验法使用。

　　例子：For example, senior salesmen in a company could recommend several return customers to junior salesmen and provide wise suggestions for them when they are confronted with difficulties。