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名师指导3月7日雅思考试大作文解析

　　Gradually, the whole company is expected to attain more wealth and to reward social members in return。

　　最后成文

　　开头段：两句话

　　1 转述原文

　　The issue of increasingly longer life span is of much contention to the general public。

　　2 提出文章要探讨的内容

　　Therefore, this essay aims to identify the possible effects that this change has brought to both individuals and society。

　　中间段：

　　建议写三段

　　两种处理方式：第一种先写两点对于个人的影响，再写对于社会的。

　　第二种先写寿命长对于个人和社会好的影响，再写坏的影响。

　　结尾段

　　1 总结文章影响

　　Therefore, although senior citizens might, to some extent, deprive the younger generation of their job opportunities, they tend to enlighten the whole society with their experience and care。

　　2 提出建议

　　Therefore, the youth are suggested to confront this situation. If they could not be offered the opportunities, it would prove that they were not so capable as the old generation, when the only way out was to learn from old people and try to gain more experiences。