模仿后:The traffic congestion is partly because of the poor road system。
类似表达:be largely due to
3。对抽象名词的解释、举例,细化抽象名词:
a。范文原句: Even when children use a computer of other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends
b. purpose比较抽象,such as getting information or emailing friends属于对purpose内容的解释,通过对抽象名词的细化,一方面可以把凑点字数,把句子写得比较长,另一方面,使得句子更细节化。
c。对写作的影响:
中文例句1:有些技术会有负面影响。
未模仿前:Some technologies are of negative impact.
模仿后:Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact。
类似细化抽象名词的表达:fromto whetheror
中文例句2.:我在中国的那几年,有机会跟中国的翻译们紧密地合作。
未模仿前:During those years when I was in China, I had the opportunity to work closely with Chinese translators.
模仿后:During those years when I was in China, I had the opportunity to work closely with Chinese translators, from beginners fresh out of school to those most capable senior professors。
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