英文：外教谈雅思作文如何获得高分_雅思英语经验技巧

英文：外教谈雅思作文如何获得高分

　　One typical problem in Task 2 responses is related to the concept of clear position. The marking system makes direct reference to the writers position. To achieve a good score in Task 2 the examiner must be satisfied that a clear position is clear throughout. This means that the opinion of the writer must be easily understood and recognisable at the beginning of the essay, in the body and in the conclusion. The following introduction sentence does not present a clear position:

　　in the following paragraphs I will present my opinion on this question

　　The same can be said of a conclusion which does the following:

　　In conclusion it is obvious that both arguments contain their own positive and negative features and each method could be used in different situations Where is the writers clear position?

　　Consider the following question :

　　Nowadays many people enjoy dangerous sports such as mountain climbing or parachuting. Governments should ban these sports to protect the safety of the public. Do you agree or disagree。

　　An introduction with a clear position might look like this:

　　In recent years we have seen a considerable rise in dangerous or extreme sports, although I do not support an outright ban on such activities, I do feel that governments should restrict or regulate these pursuits。