主体段:
作为discuss both的文章,主体段一般都是2段安排,而且不论两段是相反还是互补关系,字数篇幅都应该相近才对。考官在之前书中有所提及Cambridge IELTS5 Test3有关竞争与合作的题目中,考官最后给出的参考范文是得分为6分的学生作文,文章共分成4段,结尾段是阐述自己观点和理由的段落,而中间两段分别 介绍双方的看法,但是两个段落明显存在长短详略,所以考官给出的评语中有这么一句话:Although the answer considers the main issues in the question, it deals much more with the aspect of competition than it does with cooperation 而在这篇文章里,考官也是将两个主体段落安排成82及89的两个段落。
In order to be a good member of any society the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. 考官首先点出不仅仅是要学习,之后就根据第一方观点进行讨论,认为家长该在这一教育上发挥作用。Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world。
However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community。
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