诊断:issue是可数名词,但这里既没有用冠词又不是复数,显然是有问题的。
修改:However, whether the government... on arts is a controversial issue。
【细节二】名词单复数
3. 原文:However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services .。.
诊断:fund表示政府拨款的资金,此处应该使用复数,表示多笔拨款。
修改:However,whether the government should allocate funds topublic services .。.
4. 原文:In my view, public service are vitalto our life, but.。.
诊断:句子主语public service与谓语are不一致,主语是单数,而谓语是复数用法。此处public services泛指公共服务,应用复数。
修改:In my view, public services are vitalto our life, but.。.
【细节三】动词词组用法
5. 原文:Nowadays, [an] increasing number of people concernedabout the enhancement of public services。
诊断:动词词组be concernedabout.。.表示对关注。但这句话中使用时漏掉了be动词,导致整个句子语法错误。
修改:Nowadays,[an] increasing number of people are concerned about the enhancement of public services。
注:中括号内单词[an]表示已在原文中修改的错误。下同。
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