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As everyone knows, twilight is indeed a very popular bestselling novel and has been on screen recently. Following my friends suggestion, I watched the movie and fell in love with the beautiful story. In it, I saw the beauty of the hardship.
Many of us may wonder, can hardship be beautiful? Perhaps most of us consider that hardship is such a painful and awful moment in life that we wont even bare to think of it. Honestly speaking, I hold the same thought before. However, after watching the movie and the novel itself, I felf much encouraged. In my view, sometimes, its useful andvaluable to dig deeper of the story. The love and happy ending is romantic indeed, while have you ever thought of the hardship they both have conquered before they got to the wonderful ending?
Then, can you imagine the quarrels of the three different kinds: the wolves, the man, and the vampire? Thats what Bella faced. Edward, on the other hand,suffered from his life for Bella, and was brave enough to face enemy both from his own spiece and the wolf---Jocob.
But as a reader, I enjoyed all their hardships, frustrations, and their misunderstanding towards each other. Why? The answer is no romance without hardship.
So why cant we face our hardships more confidently and bravely? After all, I believe in a saying: humans are forgettable creatures, but hardships can never be forgotten.
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