中考英语写作指导：(二)记叙文及范文点评_中考作文

中考英语写作指导：(二)记叙文及范文点评

　　点评：这是一篇记人的叙述文。先交代了My Best Friend是谁，接着通过事例交代了为什么我们是最好的朋友。最后阐述了主题。

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　　My Class Teacher

　　My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years. He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. I think he is a good class teacher.

　　点评：这篇文章取材都是身边熟悉的人，作者也有东西可写，更具有可读性。另外，写人时可以把主语稍作调整，读起来轻松多了。

　　I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is Cherry. Now I am studying in the middle school.1 want to be an actress because I think It is a funny and exciting job...

　　写事一定要交代时间、地点、人物、情节。常用的句型如：

　　It took place/happened

　　Last/week/year/Monday/Tuesday...

　　One Friday morning..

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　　Our Class Meeting

　　Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom. All the students and our class teacher took part in it. We held a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us spoke at the meeting actively. After the discussion, we all decided to study hard so as to make our life better and better.