精彩句子：I can understand your feeling. But on the other hand.

点评：注意一定不能上去就谈看法，而要先复述烦恼，并且要有感同身受。接下来，也不要直接说建议，而要先说自己的看法，而且要是积极的。On the other hand 是个非常好的过渡，以后可以常用。

2014中考英语写作提升周周练+范文精讲汇总

二.提出一些建议： But if you really dont like it, why not go to your teachers and tell them your feelings? Maybe they will give less homework. Besides, its also a good idea to make full use of your time, and then you may have some time to relax.

精彩句子：Besides, its also a good idea to make full use of your time, and then you may have some time to relax.

点评：建议至少写两点。注意，每一个建议都要有对于建议的进一步解释。每个点要有两句话或者一个复合句。两点之间用 besides 等过渡词过渡。用好词组，make use of，take advantage of 等。

三. 鼓励努力学习：Anyway I hope you can enjoy your study. There is a saying, No pains, no gains. I think if you work hard, youll have a bright future.

精彩句子：There is a saying, No pains, no gains.

点评： 鼓励努力学习就是这篇文章的结尾了。在结尾处能用到一个谚语能起到画龙点睛的作用。但务必要注意是合适的，而且是通俗易懂的。否则适得其反。

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