精彩句型和短语:There is no doubt that....或者 Undoubtedly... 表示毫无疑问
Show ones gratitude:表达感激之情。
句型提升:Undoubtedly,parents have put much time and effort into bringing me up.
点评:务必先翻译提示,然后引出感激父母这个话题。
二.描述一件事:
Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.
点评:记叙一个事的时候,注意要有细节,体现出画面感。亮点:I played the CD.
It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile.
另外,要有记叙顺序:事情的起因,经过,结果。 三个缺一不可,为什么要买
CD,买 CD 的经过是什么,CD 怎么样的。送给妈妈后的结果是什么。
三.最后谈感受:
I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.
点评:谈感受要先说自己对于这个事的感受,这个事的意义是什么。再说以后会怎么做。
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