精彩句型和短语:Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. Make up ones mind to do sth, 下定决心做某事。
句型提升:Small as it was,The CD represented my love and gratitude to my parents. And I felt really proud that I did something special for them. Encouraged by their understanding smiles, I made up my mind to do things like this more often as my sincere gratitude.
第一档:(15~13 分)
完全符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全。句式多样,词汇丰富。语言准确,语意连贯,表达清楚,具有逻辑性。
第二档:(12~9 分)
基本符合题目要求,观点正确,要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯,表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误,但不影响
整体理解。
第三档:(8~5 分)
部分内容符合题目要求,要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言不通顺,表达不够清楚,影响整体理解。
第四档:(4~0 分)
与题目有关内容不多,只是简单拼凑提示词语,所写内容难以理解。
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