classroom.
点评:1.具体做法最好写上三点,三点之间要有过渡。过渡不要频繁使用 first,
second,third。这篇文章处理的很好,to help with it, Besides, and
2. 注意从句的运用,比如时间状语从句,定语从句等。
句式提升:可以加入非限定性定语从句,解释具体的做法后会有什么效果。
二.感受: As students, I think its our duty to protect the environment of our school.
And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.
点评:感受要说出来为什么要保护环境,和保护环境的意义。
高级句式:It is our duty to do sth. The simplest activities can make a real difference
to.
三.建议:So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And its also a good idea to take part in recycling programmes.
点评:建议可以同样写上三点,句式可以更加多变些。
结尾要总结:I hope everyone will care about the environment. I believe we can make
our school more and more beautiful.
句式提升:As long as everyone makes contributions to the program, no matter how
small, it will make a great difference. Both our school and our life will be more and
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