Next,Finally的结构描述,层次感很强。不定式的恰当运用体现了考生较好的语法功底。
教师拟评分:9分[例2]Fouryears'schoollife审题:该题要求考生对四年的初中生活进行回顾和总结,适合以夹叙夹议的方式来写作。(此外,从情感教育的角度来看,阅卷老师总希望读到考生回忆自己美好、快乐的初中生活,而不是讨厌自己的母校、老师、同学等消极情绪的体现。)学生作文:I'vebeeninmymiddleschoolforfouryears.Fouryears'schoollifeplaysanimportantroleinmylife.Ienjoymakingfriends,gettingknowledgeandhavinginterestingtimeinmyschool.Ihavealsomadefriendshipwithlotsofclassmates,andIhavealsobeentaughtdifferentlessonsbylotsofdifferentpatientteachers.Ihavegrownupalotinthepastfouryears.Iwillneverforgetmyfouryears'schoollife.
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