（第三段：看电视的优点。）

　　In my opinion, we have something that we cant learn at school. Watching TV is a good way to help us to learn this kind of things. （首先要说明看电视的优点，而不是支持该观点的理由。可以改成：Watching TV has many advantages. By watching TV, we have learned something that cant be learned at school.）On TV, we know more about the news, sciences and so on in many different programs.

　　（一定要贯彻固定句型和短语优先的原则。对某人来说方便做某事表达成： It is convenient for sb. to do sth. 了解表达成： be informed of sth. 不要因为它是个被动结构，就不习惯去用它。不习惯的表达往往要好于自创的表达。否则，哪天让你用脚抠鼻子给全班观摩，一定很精彩（玩笑）。可以改成：On TV，it is convenient for us to be informed immediately of what is happening around the world.） We can also make us fee relaxed when we are so tired by this way. (有点自相矛盾了。看电视看累了，再通过看电视来放松。你真牛！可以改成： Sometimes after a long time of tiring work, watching TV programs can relax us to some degree.) So I say that watching TV is not only educational but also meaningful.

　　(没必要说I say，整篇文章你说的还不够吗？So watching TV is not only educational but also meaningful.)

　　（第四段：看电视的缺点。）

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