3.文章最后加入个人评价(观点)。

　　下面是学生的作文：

　　(1)

　　As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY. So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.

　　Let’s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.

　　(2)

　　Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.

　　Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY has been raised by the government.

　　At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.

　　The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it.

　　这是两个学生的习作，他们分别以独特的思路和风格，利用丰富的词汇、准确的时态、简单句和复合句的搭配、合理的构思使文章语言流利，一气呵成，展现了扎实的英语语法功底和综合运用能力。

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