I'm a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school. The hall is clean and tidy. The dishes look nice and taste delicious as well. What's more， the workers there treat us as their friends， which makes us feel very happy.

　　　　However， we feel the price of the meal is a little high. Besides， we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition， we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore， may I suggest something be done to solve the problem so that we can all enjoy our meals at school？

　　　　Thanks for your consideration.

　　　　Yours

　　　　Li Hua

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