英语习作评改
一、写作提示:
假如你是某外语学校的学生,名叫李华。请就你校食堂的状况( canteen service )给校长写封信。
优点 不足 建议
食堂干净 价格偏高
饭菜可口 种类偏少 尽快解决
服务态度好 等候时间较长
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右。
2. 开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Principal,
I'm a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school
二、学生习作:
Dear Mr. Principal,
I'm a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school. The hall is clean and tidy, but the price of meals is a little too high. The dishes look nice and delicious to eat, but there are a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. The service is good, but we have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. I suggest something should be done to solve the problem.
Yours
Li Hua
该篇习作将表格中的内容基本上表达了出来,也没有严重的语法错误,但是仍存在着诸多问题:一段写下来,主题不明,缺乏条理;表达生硬,句式单调,语气不够委婉;字数偏少,不合要求。该文得分 13 分。
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